Tuesday, September 13, 2011

The Rendezvous - A Short


I haven't been doing enough writing lately. So, for fun, here's a fictional story.

The Rendezvous
by KK Sierra

She stepped off the plane onto the jetway; the oppressive humidity making her gasp for breath. She glanced down at her sweaty, rumpled clothes, and made her way up the boarding ramp to the closest restroom.  The air conditioned terminal bringing her momentary relief.

Secured behind a stall door she removed the plastic cover from the mint green dress with its narrow, braided straps and cluster of flowers at the right side of the waist. Stripped down to her panties, she balanced on her flip flops to keep her feet from the dirty floor as she refreshed her deodorant and swiped some lotion on her legs and arms. The light scent of mango danced around her.

Excitement that had been building during the flight threatened to bubble over and she could not help but smile. It had been weeks and she missed her love. She was looking forward to the look of affection in his eyes and hoped he appreciated the effort she put forth to look special. It had been a long day, followed by a long drive and an equally long flight. The clothing she wore was far from her normal attire.

Slipping into her beige peep-toed heels, she smoothed the front of the airy dress. It swirled around her, the skirt ending just above her knees. Quickly she repacked her things, momentarily wondering why she hadn’t gotten the usual, “you land yet?” text message. The better to surprise him, she surmised.

A minimalist, she ran through her hair quickly with a brush and freshened her breath. No need for makeup. She loved her bright red lipstick but only when she didn’t plan on kissing anyone, and tonight, she definitely planned on kissing someone. Anticipation made her shiver. With a final, satisfied glance in the mirror, she grabbed her bag and headed out.

Foot traffic in the terminal had diminished quickly, as would be expected for a late evening flight. She nodded to the now familiar, aging security guard as she passed TSA’s point of no return into the unsecured part of the airport. He smiled in return and gave her a thumbs up. She was confident in her pretty, flirty dress and high heels.

The hall, however, was quite empty. No tall, smiling man. No sweeping embrace. No phone call. No text message. Her walk slowed, her gait faltered, her posture drooped, the confidence gone. Stunned, she stands in the corridor, lost.

A text sent, “I’m here.”

No response is received.

She wanders down the corridor for some sign. Finding none, she walks out into the still hot night air. Traffic whooshes by as passengers arrive and depart. The tweet of the policeman's whistle mingling with the hydraulic lift of the nearby bus. Alas, no sign of whom she seeks.

Forgotten.

Alone.

She sits.

The pretty dress is wrinkled.

Her face tear streaked.

And she sits.

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Update 9/27/11:  If you'd like, read part 2, here.

7 comments:

  1. Ouch. My heart feels for the girl. I always have this fear when I'm heading to see someone. A fear I will be forgotten or just plain stood up.

    Well written, babe.

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  2. Maybe he was in an accident, she tells herself. Maybe Brad's phone was damaged.

    Even as she considers the possibility, Jenn knows it's not true. His drivers were hired as much for their driving ability as for their security training. No, if he wanted to be here, he would have been. She knew people were watching and tried to fight it but still her tears came.

    Suddenly, a woman screamed and shoved a luggage cart overflowing with dark suitcases headlong into the busy airport thruway. Like an accident drama, brakes squealed as dozens of cars and trucks skidded and slid sideways. Somehow, miraculously, not a single vehicle struck another as the cart rolled unmolested across all four lanes and bounced lightly against the opposite curbing.

    "There's your stuff, Herbert!" the frumpy, middle-aged woman yelled out. "That's what happens when you dis yer woman!"

    Jenn wiped her eyes and got to her feet, she suddenly regretted her choice of high heels. She ignored the leering stares of two young men who leaned against a cab several cars down. They looked to be barely in their twenties. One wore a tee shirt and moved several times in an apparent attempt to accentuate his scrawny bicep.

    Were younger woman really impressed with something like that, she wondered. Surely she wouldn't have been, even if she hadn't been married and pregnant at the age of seventeen.

    She was just wondering if any one of her four major credit cards had enough of a balance for three nights stay at a hotel, when someone called her name.

    "Jenn!"

    She spun to see Brad waving at her from a partly open glass door. He was inside the terminal? His hair was disheveled and his eyes were wide...with what: surprise, fear?

    "Jenn, how would you like to leave for Europe...right now?"

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  3. Interesting take my friend. :) Stay tuned to hear "his" POV.

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  4. Actually had this happen. Was upset at the time because I didn't know the full story. After getting very upset and calling alternate transportation ( difficult on Easter Sunday), I took the poor dog out of the crate for a walk then proceeded to learn how to play wheelchair basketball from the Skycap in between flights.

    Hurt? Sure. Did I get over it? Eventually. But it ended up for the best. Great story KK

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  5. KK, your story was beautifully done. I debated the response and determined maintaining the non-specific literary tone of your opening would have been A) hard to beat, B) intrusive on your "original" story. Hence, my attempt at genrefying and personalizing Part Two :-)

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  6. I hadn't intended to do much more than his POV and leave it ala An Affair to Remember for the reader to insert their own ending, happily ever after or not. That's in interesting idea however...a team writing adventure...perhaps for another story?

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  7. Thank you Melanie...and thank you for reading and commenting as well. I'm sorry to hear that happened to you. Funny thing, I was talking to my son last night and gave this to him as a scenario and asked him what his excuse was. His response? "I'm dead?" I laughed and said to think of something else. His final conclusion, "There's really no reason for me to forget you except I'm a jerk." What a great kid, huh?

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